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Question: A poem written by a drunk who only just escaped!.!.comments!?
it's her round now
and i can hear my drinks singing
the way that ice sounds
it's bourbon she's bringing
it delights me too much
this powerful thirst
for i drink without care
and feel none the worse
my tonic, my elixer, my giver of life
you are my dark lover, my misteress, my wife
a world without troubles
i'm never affected
for in your sweet arms
i'm always protected
you showed me great dreams
i could never hope to reach
you taught me grime truths
though you weren't one to preach!.!.!.!.!.
are you my friend or my foe
for you bring me undone
you take from me everything
and deliever to me none
so i grew to despise you
and blame you for all
as you drowned my weak heart
as you leaked from my pore
when i cursed you no-one listened
for it condemned them too
'if you are then we are, we drink just like you'
but the difference my friends
is you never drink on your own
and you all seem to have forgotton
i'm never alone
oh, a dark death i drowned
i sank in hells brew
it swallowed my spirit
and my soul it did spew
until there in a puddle
that had once been my life
i promised you wouldn't hurt me again
and it's sure been some fight!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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