Will you comment on justice served?

Question: Will you comment on justice served!?

Blessed carnal comforts sought
at pennies on the dollar
lessons learned are never taught
to little boys with collars

Trusted elders forcing doom
the gullet bursts from tension
haze of menace fills the room
a deed that goes unmentioned

Silent creeping, gun's firm grip
he wanders through the night
shivered spine and flex of hip
he rids the dog from sight!.

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A title would be helpful on this one!. I know what I got, and that's good enough for me, but if you wanted me to see something other than a little boy growing up to murder his pedophiling priest, a title might've done that!.

This one too has a nice accompaniment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the double entente of the dog closes this one awkwardly, to me the dog is just in the wrong place at the wrong time, because I wasn't certain whether the dog was the doer of deeds unmentioned or a displaced victim of circumstance!. Otherwise well written!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting poem!.

Justice & Philosophy !.!.!.!.!.!.!.
( Cain vs!. To Each His Own)

!.!.!.!.man does what he ought to do in the circumstances confronting him !.!.!.!.and to hell with the law!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A little strange !.And depressing to me!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

You write with a tone I know!.
Justice was not served!.

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