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Question: In your opinion, what do you think of this poem!?
He walked the street one night and to his delight,
he is struck, beaten, burned!.
No one looks, no one sees, their heads up high they shed a blind eye!.
Cursed to be dammed to hell, to the dark abyss below!.
Nothing he does can extinguish what is done!.
The flame of hate burns strong in the night!.
Twas' only child, innocent of sin, and all that follows !.
Only he knows, he knows wrong, he knows right!.
He knows the wrong, but pushes the right!.
Killer be free, haunt another day, for your day will end,
when an unjust law is no law at all!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very interesting subject matter!.!.!. I like it!.!.!. I had to read it a few times in a row!.
A guilt infused man!.!.!. happy to receive a punishment he thinks he deserves, for if that punishment never came then there is no such thing as good or god!.!.!.!. because what is right in his mind is that he be punished for his wrong!.!.!. it is a self-induced, self-destructive test!.
If he is the child, or the killer of child, or maybe both (killer of himself), he tries to understand the world as a child does!.!.!.
very thought-provoking!.!.!. please continue writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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