A poem, silly indeed, so read it ...if you want, then please free to insult me?

Question: A poem, silly indeed, so read it !.!.!.if you want, then please free to insult me!?

I visited Venus last night
The place was quite a sight
The frogs were rocking
The lizards were talking
The snakes were looking mean
Aliens a shade of wintergreen

I danced with a lizard or two
I drank some of the Venus brew
I thought I’d take a little walk
A snake came too and we talked
The atmosphere was buzzing
Caterpillars crept round fussing

We partied through the hours
They showed me all their super powers
The lizards started leaving
I felt I should be retrieving
My coat and hat and ride…
And back to earth, smoothly slide
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I WILL NOT INSULT IT! Ithink it is very,very amusing! But one question I have for You is,did you leave out the part about the in flight drinks!! LOL! Perhaps some Venus brew from the crew!?!? ha,ha!! Very nice,I only wish that My pills would make Me write so well! Perhaps I need to switch to Your DR!. LOL! Thank for the smile,its going for miles!! !?!? Should I be insulted or honured that lano used my name!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love this poem it reminds me of shel silverstien, who is one of my two favorite poets along with edgar allan poe!. I dont know if you have a gift but if you dont ussually write like this and its the meds id keep taking them!. lol jk but this poem is very good and im sure it would win an award for humorous poems!.

One thing I would change about this poems is saying they showed me all thier powers instead of super powers!. it just sounds like a little too much to me but its your decision!. anyway kudos on your terrific poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

One of the best poems I have read, on this site, It had beat rather than meter, like uncle Walty, you led me to questions and yet I know I wasn't suppose to answer them, it left me drunk in the forbidden!. Two thumbs up if I could!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey, Spanky, Buk, Mag, Dave, etc!., etc!. QV's poem!? Read it and weep, sucker!. Such a feat of cleverness and discipline is beyond you!.!.!.and always will be!. Enjoy your 2 cents a book!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Caterpillars crept round fussing is my favorite line

all in all reminds me of mushroom teaWww@QuestionHome@Com

its a beautiful poem! anyone who would insult it obviously has no sense of good literature! Www@QuestionHome@Com

you said you wanted to be insulted!.!.!.Okay!.!.!.
Your poem is as lame as your avatar!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

tht sounds lik some adventerous dream as well as some nightmare!.It 's hilarious as well!.very nice!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Rather amusing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol
that was a fun lil poem for a stressed student
made me smile
loved "aliens a shade of winter green"
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BOOOOooooooooo, it sucked!.!.!.!.!.What was the question anywaysWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hehehe!.!.!.(holds out hand for pills) sharing is caring!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a poem which shows that you have imaginationWww@QuestionHome@Com

That wasn't Venus!.!.!.it was just The Lizard Lounge!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Party on Wayne !.!.Party on GarthWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol!.
That's Cool!.
It sounds like a dream or something!.

- Thumbs Up -Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see that queef venom is still selling his drivel!.

That's nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A bar room scene right out of Star Wars! Delightful! If this is what having a migraine will do for your pen!.!.!.!.well!.!.!.just saying!.!.!.

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i like it ^^ very crazy to read, it would be good and fun for a childrens poetry novel too ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com

my mind boggles on how u keep coming up with this stuff daily!.!.u are a mazing woman!.!.no insults here!.!.!.dont mind ditz cuz she has nothing better to do than insult!.!.!.lets see her try to have half the talent u doWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think its a good poem!. poems like this although not serious, are poems!. very DR!. SUESSWww@QuestionHome@Com

haha i liked it!.

thanks for distracting me from my essay :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

depend where you came from Www@QuestionHome@Com

ah its cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com

hehe i liked it! it was cool =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it is a silly poem!. That said, let me tell you that there are people in this world who made their names (and some real money) by writing nothing but silly poems!. Try reading the poems of e!.e!. cummings (all small letters is the way it's spelled) if you don't believe me!. Even 'serious poets' such as Dylan Thomas and TS Eliot wrote silly poetry!. Your poem may be silly, but it's got good rhythm, good rhymes, and it's rather 'cute' !.!.!. it could easily be a 'metaphor' for a real human party with the narrator on drugs !.!.!. or something else entirely!. I'd give this little poem an A !.!.!. maybe if you worked on it a bit more you could earn an A+ but an A is a very good grade for something so 'silly' and so downright FUN to read and experience! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Silly is wonderful when it is this entertaining!. Great fun!. Here's one for you:

Who knows the secret thoughts of trees
Who's plumbed their sap and harmonies!?
Who knows why their constrictors squeeze
The tiny victims that they seize!?
Who knows why molten rock don't freeze
But roll and flow instead like seas!?
Who ever thought that I would tease
My eyebrows -- how those tweezers tweeze!
You'd be, no doubt, quite ill at ease
To see the exodus of fleas
That flee in terror when I tweeze
Long nose hair dangling to my knees
(It grew and thickened by degrees;
It must have taken centuries!.)
There's danger in a simple sneeze,
God knows what pestilence it frees,
What thousand-legged entities
Will rise to write our destinies!.
(Their recent nasal mutinies
Have not escaped our scrutinies!.)
I'm sorry, but wordsmith's disease!.!.!.
It causes rhyming parodies!.
Accept my meek apologies;
We all bear crosses, patience please!
You'll soon be begging for reprise
But I'll be quite deaf to your pleas
Because you see rhymes such as these
That make you laugh until you wheeze
Quite cushion dire necessities!.
For in their shopworn majesties
(And yes, their threadbare travesties)
They mask your daily tragedies
And mock your dull idolatries;
Why would you laugh on bended knees!?
So empty your phylacteries
Of saintly, high-blown ecstasies,
Fill them chock full of levities,
Dispel all grey-tinged gravities,
Just shun this world's depravities
And cause perdition's fires to freeze!.
Release the million hes and shes
Imprisoned in their memories
And shackled in uncertainties
Who live by false hypotheses
That have the taste of discount Bries!.
Each to his own apostases!
Make these thin rhymes your rosaries,
Embrace each day's intensities,
God dash cosmic immensities --
It's your life, drink it to the lees!
Most lives are artful forgeries,
A smiling past the cavities --
Ah, little more than quiddities
That blanch before eternities!.
Ta ta, I'm winging to Belize;
I understand their killer bees --
Armadas of dark tyrranies
That fly in flat trajectories --
Are known for their inconstancies!.
('Twas safer in the Pyrenees
Despite that incident with skis!.!.!.)
I'll study their propensities
And calculate swarm densities,
Divine the sensibilities
Of these new mortal enemies,
Then soothe them with my melodies --
These dulcet metered heresies --
And teach them of life's mysteries,
Free them of their iniquities!.
Those are my labors Hercules
(No not that goblet Socrates),
The very prospect of them frees
Me to indulge insanities --
The only sure, time-tested keys
For taming nests of angry bees!.
Next time I'm choosing manatees!
If I forget, remind me please,
Get down upon your hands and knees!.!.!.
Until then, live life like the trees --
With roots, with sap, without the bees!.!.!.
Without pretentious vanities!.
There wait, at last, the certainties,
The sad to bes and not to bes
That are, my dear, humanity's!.Www@QuestionHome@Com