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Question: Watcha think of my poem!?
For him,
I place my mask upon my face!.
He may speak to me
As much as he desires,
Though I will be saying in my mind,

I hate you
You’re so immature
You don’t know what you’re missing
It hurt
You proved me wrong

THANKS


But that’s what I get
For thinking he was different
Than all the rest
But now I know,
He’s just as judgmental
As them all!.

And now I know
Who he really is
So, silently,
I thank him!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
dark, good rythme, a little angy and it stands out in the crowd!. I love it, my kind of poem!. just mabey a little bit girly though but im a guy what can i sayWww@QuestionHome@Com

ermm!.!.!. it's!.!.!. interesting!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very powerful!. It has good rhythm and tells a story in a way!. I like it!. Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a bit angry!. Don't you think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com