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Question: Would you comment on one last acrostic!?
Mother laments
At recent discovery
Gone by the wayside is son

Gone, yet not defeated
Oh, no, he's
Too resiliant for that

Suspects that by morning
Under new account
Son will be up and running
Posting and penning at will
Even though many are haters
Never do they quite understand
Dave bows to no one, his
Ending will be short lived
Do unto others be dammedWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i hope you're right ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

May he learn from the errors he has made
And make an effort now to mend his ways
Good lady, it's no tragedy at all!.

Bless Yahoo! for their wisdom come at last!.
Righteousness was served right here tonight!.
On this there can be little argument
Unless you fear what others think of you!.
God himself has answered many prayers;
He's come to bring redemption to the good
This night, this place, this blessing we rejoice!.

I feel no real compassion for the man
This is the right decision after all

Oh I'm sure you will strongly disagree
Not seeing the full truth of what is here!.

Have you thought that the many he has hurt
Instead of practicing what you all preach
May have been his undoing after all
So if his reprimand does matter so,
Enough to make you rise to his defense
Let's start with history as it occurred
For Ma, and all, the truth will set you free!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOWEEEE!! Go, Ma, Take care of them babes, I've got a sad post coming, Tell Roscoe to get out his prayer book and Milk Bones!.!.!.
As for Dave, well, let no man, woman, child or troll rest until justice is served!!
Love ya both!
ReenieWww@QuestionHome@Com

Indeed it's quite a travesty
This one should be given amnesty
So often has he been suspended
Account all freakin' upended
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He's not really gone, Ma!.!.!.more like "invisible"!.

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=HfJdETDEG!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice, the theme and lines are coherent and demonstrate the point well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

he is like a recurring dream!.(not necessarily a bad one)!. he comes and goes just to drive people nurtz, as it should be, i might add!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, no !.!.!. now I get it, and hope tomorrow will be the beginning of a new life !.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A trial for any mother!. Strength in numbers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Last line is the poem in (him)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I didn't know that was your kid!.
You should probably spank him!.Www@QuestionHome@Com