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Question: Opinion and (kind) criticism on poems!?
Haiku
Ocean waves crashing
Below fish are abundant
We must conserve it

Couplet
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The Orca is the king of the ocean,
Swimming freely with gentle motion,
He glides with the essence of festivity,
Until he is taken into captivity,
His majestic presence is now jailed!.
Unfortunately, the humans have prevailed!.



Cinquain
Money
Used to buy objects
Can be earned through a job
Then a day visiting the mall,
Bankrupt


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very well written!. I like the couplet the best!.
This line:

Swimming freely with gentle motion

is my favorite!.
I am not sure what to think about:

He glides with the essence of festivity

I prefer more of a word picture!.
The Haiku is nice!. Wish it ended with a stronger word!.

Keep it up!. I can hear the passion in your "voice!."

Best wishes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Honestly, I like them - and I think thats the first time I've ever said that about y/a poetry!

The money one is the best!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

cute and creative (like me!)Www@QuestionHome@Com