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Question: Is my poem a good poem!?
I just want to know if i can write poetry good!
BATS SR
got his heart and his soul
he lay his life down for me
and id do the same
2 year strong and
still rocking them i love yous
and i course we done **** wrong,
but still our love came out right
i loved him from the start
love at first sight
he my number one
now that's it
i'm done
To boo Jr!.
Mommy love the little man
when you were born so tiny and small
Enough for mommy to carry you in one arm
8 lbs lot of food to eat
o god what big feet
you get that from daddy
and you got my nose
i love to tickle your small little toes
The dimples on you cheek
And the one on you chin
no what or where your going or where i been
Always remember your mommy's little man!!
true love
A true love Story by Kassy Redman
The day in December
I'll always Remember!.
You asked me to a movie
Instead we stayed in
and got hammered
there was a little flirting then a kiss
then from there we now have our first kid
Two years later and still in love
Through the ups and downs
And all the smiles and frowns
we made it this far
as far as south Carolina
living in the boons
living are lives together
i cant wait till the day two becomes one
so this is my true love story!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like the voice in your poetry!. It is strong and unique!. The baby poem is the best, but all of the poems have some excellent lines!. I'd love to read poems written by you about other topics, like observations of people you see in your life in the boonies!. Love poems are written so often that it is hard to write anything that hasn't been said before, and your special voice deserves to have unique topics that let it shine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
maybe im used to the extended vocabularies of Hemingway, Shakespeare, and Fitzgerald!.!. or maybe im right u suck!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love it!.!.at last something with a unique style and!.!.!.yes !.yes !. not about death,misery,loneliness or suicide!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!!.!.yeah!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You know, at first i wasn't convinced, but as i read more it seemed to get better!. I wouldn't know how to describe it but there really is something about these poems that kept me reading and it hink that yes they are pretty damn good!. :)
They're very unique
I wasn;t so sure about the first poem though, i think it was because you werent correct in grammar and swore and so on, but i definatly liked the second and third :)Www@QuestionHome@Com