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Question: Could you please help me finish my poem!?
We’re having a beautiful weather
She said
To mask her deepest sadness
With a statement
That…

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How about this!?

"We’re having beautiful weather"
She said
To mask her deepest sadness
With a statement
That mundane may it be,
Told a tale for me,
Where the soul should tell lies,
While her heart may still die!.
In life, unpredictable,
I thought to myself,
As I answered,
With one word, "Indeed!."

Sorry, it's not top notch, but I really am grasping at straws for what the poem is about!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

some ideas!.!.!.

clouded loves gladness!.!.!.!.!?!?!?

was tinged with such a soft caress!?!?!?!?
(i don't even think this one rhymes!.!.!.)

with a statement that he would have bet
was tangled by loves madness!.!.!.(i didn't want to use madness, but it sort of calls out for it!.!.!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.revealed her madness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

with a statement
than bland
even the air had flavorWww@QuestionHome@Com