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Question: Pearls of tears: a good enough title for this!?
I have written this in quite the same situation and weather as it is described in it!.!.!. I'd appreciate comments on what it contains!.

*****The Precious Pearls*****
I see the pearls,
the pearls of tears!.
Seem like the most
precious ones,
on the sheet cover
I wish I was one of them

That,
Some cold night
A girl would sit and!.
Let go from her eyes
While Stares at the snow!.

I wish I was the biggest of them,
to lighten her head and heart!.

She would wipe a part of me
From her eyes
When she hears the door knocks!.
And with wet fingers,
She removes the hair from her face!.

I wish I were as helpful,
one would feel happy with and after me!.

But there is another possibility
may be I am like that:
when taken out,
is all fine and right
and a good sleep of peace!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
"may be I am like that"- I read that line and cringed!.!.!.you should work on that line and make it more descriptive!. Especially in poetry every line has to count! I don't like the Title!.!.!.sort of deflates the poem!. I would rather see a title that keeps the content a little more mysterious!. I like how the first ten lines read!.!.!.you control the reader and prevent them from reading too fast!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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