I'm not a writer by any means, but?

Question: I'm not a writer by any means, but!?

I wrote a poem today!. I've only written 2!. I just started writing recently, and I'd like to know what you think!.!.!.

overwhelmed!.!.
immersed!.!.
surrounded by his transparent intricacy!.!.

captivated!.!.

all of me l'd give!.!.

so vulnerable!.!.
heart beats for him!.!.
so quickly!.!.

held!.!.
kept!.!.
fed!.!.

physically, mentally, spiritually!.!.

satisfied!.!.

strong, safe, secure!.!.
this is where i belong!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Guitargirl, love isn't a good topic!. It's general and common!. Do you have any idea how many love poems there are!?

Yet, this poem is very good!. It's written from the heart, something many poems today lack!. I can tell you truly feel or have felt this way before, and so you wrote this while feeling this emotion!. Some of my best poems I have personally written come from a time when I was angry, sad, happy, or some other strong emotion that found its way on paper!. Next time you feel a strong emotion, I recommend writing about it!. It relieves stress as well, I've found!Www@QuestionHome@Com

those are really good, very deep and descriptive!.

read mine and comment!
thanks!.
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It's a really nice descriptive poem in free verse!.

Love is a great topic for poetry!.

I like your poem!. Alot!. It's very debonair!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it I think it's good! Great job! Keep up the good work! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its just lovely 4 astart ,help with a dictionaryWww@QuestionHome@Com