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Question: A twisted - mirror Acrostic Sestina I suppose!. Comments!?
100 Bucks For A Ten-Minute Gondola Ride
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Vulnerable they are who face her floods
Engrossed in vibrant veneer views she leaves
Noisome scents of swollen sea on people
Inching, sinking stink in Isles this Venice
Churlish clamour chasm pathways putrid
Epoch clap’traps harried into crying!.
Fearful flee Murano’s muses crying
Languor lists precariously in floods
Over weights lean inwards from the putrid
On woeful taxis winging them and leaves
Dim gondoliers auctioning to people
Summon swank to sway the swamp of Venice!.
Leery sketchers scribble visions Venice
Err the moods with sodden canvas crying
Arggh ! such drivel drippings are the people
Vagrant portraits pre-empting piebald floods!.
Exploited, maddened many question leaves,
“Shall we wend one other day so putrid” !?
Pigeons launching smart bombs on the putrid
Everywhere one sees this Play in Venice
Oozing opal orbs their curtain leaves
Poignant acts of victims’ outrage crying
Liberate tears of crocodiles con floods
Enter forth the fork which lore the people:
Cautiously it circles in it’s people
Rounding them to centres fixed for putrid
“Yield not this pallid plank to liquid leaves” !
Ill-advised they cling to arms in Venice
Numb are they inert thus starts the crying
Genesis in a jaundiced journey floods…!.!.
Poetic bent!. Mystical touring leaves!.
Untypical!. WTF my people!?
Twisting, laughing,drowning, sinking, crying!.
Restless in washed up boxers of putrid,
Indistinguishable idem – Venice!
Dry eyes notta one in the freakin’ flood!?
Eww ickk the Valleys crying in the floods,
Enter here putrid Venice – mix people!
Wish not for fall of leaves, where no one leaves!.
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Bravo Bravo Bravo !!
I love the flattering use
of the word " putrid " !!
My new word of the day !!
What a waste of a putrid 100 bucks !!
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Having been in Venice/Murano/Burano last year in Sept!.-Oct!., when the weather was beautiful and the water at a considerably lower level, I feel for those who know and love this beautiful city!. With all the money they pour into wars and large hadron colliders, you'd think they could come up with a way of dealing with the high waters!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I bought a parasol and everything!.
You stinker!
Okay maybe you cute stinker of medium height and bashfulness!.
Uproar and rain on my romantic parade along with gondolas needing paint and cleaning!.
Buildings awash with broken caverns could sink and sure stink!.
Harrumph!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Can you do the twist, the macarena, break dance and docie doe on the dance floor in tandem!?
You have unleashed a cacophony of blackbirds in the channels of my brain!.!.
I never expected such from you!.!.!.!. Wow!
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I am going to wait till the movie comes out! lol The city of water is certainly awash with the flooding!. Do the odors add to the beauty of the city!? Definitely interesting wording here!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Proof again, that it is a VERY thin line between insanity and genius
(you are dancing all over that line) pahoooooooootWww@QuestionHome@Com
This piece is an extra large!. I'm going to admit to being rather impressed here: I'm rather impressed!. Well done!.
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I love the 'eww ickk' part!.!.!.
Huh!? I didn't read everything!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very well written, sir : )
Are you writing all these down and assembling a book!? You shouldWww@QuestionHome@Com
Did you pause you breath while writing this!? It seems to flow so well that I think you must not have!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Phwooar - it stinks!
Clever you!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Can you go fishing there!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Dude! Just tell me you're getting royalties for this!.!.!.ok!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ditto what hp and Mixtli said, double ditto, too!
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what hp said!. and Grazie alla tua ! Www@QuestionHome@Com