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Question: I WROTE THIS, but is it any good!?
Another hour of idle thoughts won't change much
Just like the faces of the people who don't say much at all
I want to fall, I want to fall

The ticking clock is the story of me
The empty, shattered bottle in the middle of the street
Has more value than I do

The blank slate of paper staring in my direction
awaiting my emotion, my anger, my subject of affection
But they won't come at all,
because I don't live at all,
I just want to fall





*some other lyrics that I could put into song*:

The foggy atmosphere isn't the problem, it's the sun's deprivation in me
I'm aware of my surroundings, but I'm hypnotized by restraint to breathe

The dog who wags his tail and welcomes all guests
The missionary's daughter with the intense senses
The bright eyed girl with the passionate heart
Who loves music, and makes her own art

You are all living, you are all breathing, where am I headed, why aren't I bleeding!? I'm already nowhere, headed for no place, somebody save me, God, show your face

more lyrics:

I want to fall, I want to fall
the only times I've felt are when I lost it all
I want to fall, I want to fall
Nothing has color when everything's dull
Nothing has color when everything's dull

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's good, poetry wise!.

but, uh, if you really feel that way, you may need some counseling or something!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AMAZING!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really really good

You should write often!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats way good

very deepWww@QuestionHome@Com