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Question: Just for fun!.!. Have caught a bit of the essense of a rooster in this quick piece!?
The rooster
The rooster is a cocky bird
He struts his stuff wanting to be heard
He picks on weaker birds than he
He’s rough and tough, mean as can be

The henhouse is a buzz today
A batch of eggs the hens did lay
They’ll sit on them ‘til hatchings done
While cocky rooster struts his stuff for fun


The moral of the story if there must be one
‘Tis all the little ladies get the work all done
While rooster struts his beak a crowing
The pullets in henhouse are growing

The rooster bound for stew pot very soon
We all shall drink his broth with silver spoon
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Aww poor little rooster!.
Nice read Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Rooster is the cock-o-the-walk!.
Love the tail too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

haha i liked it was a very good poem as well as amusing!.

please answer mine

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Poor males! They are always mistaken for monsters!
Cute and funny poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice work! I thought it was quite amusing,and very entertaining! But You made Me feel sorry for the rooster!! Good job!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

All good things become broth! Yummy!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've got some metrical rough spots here; I expected perhaps eight-syllable lines after reading the opening line but instead you bounced all over the place; yet, the overriding sense I had was that you wanted to write in the eight-syllable count!. If so, perhaps:

The rooster is a cocky bird
Who struts his stuff but to be heard
And picks on weaker ones than he;
He's rough and tough as birds can be!.

The hen house is abuzz today --
A clutch of eggs the hens did lay;
They'll nest on them 'til hatching's done
While cocky rooster struts for fun!.

The moral of the story's one
That ladies must the work get done;
Roosters strut with prideful crowing --
Hatchlings in the hen house growing!.

That rooster will be stew so soon
That we'll be sippng broth by noon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com