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Question: I wrote this poem about a girl I really like!. What do you guys think about it!?
I could imagine the moment when that perfect song plays!.
Our eyes will meet, our hands will touch,
and our hearts will match the music's beat!.
It'll be awkward at first, but you carry on with you smile!.
I could do this for an everlasting while!.
My mind is happy, but my heart is sad!.
I know this dance won't last forever!.
I know we won't always be together!.
Throughout the dance I think these things through!.
I wish for a happy ending,
not alone but with you!.
The song finally ends, you go back with your friends!.
I just stand there!.
Awestruck!.
Hopeful!.
Fulfilled!.
This perfect dance was just what I wanted, just what I needed!.
All I ever longed for was just one dance with you!.

I'm in seventh grade, I'm a Christian and I would like to know what I should do about this girl!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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your poem just explains so much it blows my mind! your really saying what you actually feel, and in the end your asking for one dance with her!. your words are telling your story!. please, show this to her!. i think she'd really enjoy it!. not many guys i know can write as good as this! if you really want to carry out your likeness for her then i say go for it! there's no need to hide it!. take the chance before you regret it!. one must live each day with no regrets!. if we didn't have to hide things from others, we wouuldn't have to live in this kind of world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AAWWWWWWW!!!! I wish the guys at my school would write me a poem! I'm in seventh grade too, and all they guys in my grade care about are girls that are "hot" and have big boobs and a nice butt!. ugh!. pigs!. but you should definitely give her the poem!. Actually, you should read it to her!. so cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com

That was amazing!
Well at my school we have dances!.You should ask her to go!.On the final dance have the paper in your hand hold her hand tight and at the end let go and leave the paper in her hand as you walk away!.She will know ho much that dance and how much she means to you!
lol!Yes I'm a 7th grade romantic!haha!

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I love it, and personally I would love a guy to write me a poem!.

BUT!.
It depends what kind of girl she is!. Some girls may be mean and show it to their friends/ laugh ect!. Very petty I know!. I guess it all depends on what YOU think!. Do YOU think she will like it!? Do you trust her enough not to laugh!?

Hope I helped!. Good Luck with whatever you choose to do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Definitely let her see this poem! Oh my gosh, young love!.!.(well, I'm still pretty young myself) But, I think you should give it to her and tell her how you feel but don't lay it on her too thickly!. and see how it goes from there! Good luck!!Www@QuestionHome@Com