Please read my poem. Thankyou everyone. ??

Question: Please read my poem!. Thankyou everyone!. ?!?

Hey, i'm 15 and i wrote this poem!. It is about being ill, rapidly deteriorating!. Wanting to die!. This is my poem!.

"Desire to Die"

No one to help
I strive alone
Hastily weakening
Approaching the unknown

Head in hands
Crying to myself
Hunger for an end
Of this ill health

At a snails pace
The days pass by
Each with growing remorse
My desire to die
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How sad your story is!. We hope it is fiction!. Last summer we spent some time looking for a word that means 'head-in-hands!.' I think the best one we came up with was 'cradle!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com

Here's another one to think about!.!.!.!.

Mary was blind and John wanted to marry her!.
She told John I won't marry you until I can see!.
Then Mary was told someone had donated some eyes for her!.
After the operation and she could see the nurse brought in a visitor!.
It was John who then asked her!.!."Will you marry me now!?"
Mary looked at John and saw that he was blind!. She thought for a second and said "No, I don't want to be stuck with a blind man!."
As the nurse took John out of the room he stopped and said!.!.
"OK Dear, please take care of my eyes!." Www@QuestionHome@Com

while i too hope its fiction the poem is wonderful!. THe desire to die theme is used quite often but this adds a new kick you could say to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well penned! All in all its a very descriptive and straight to the point!.You are quite talented!. I too hope that this poem is a fiction!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice!. i thought a little about cancerWww@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like a similar poem I wrote called "Married!.!.!.!.for life"Www@QuestionHome@Com