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Question: More Poetry Judgement!?
Your presance is like a beutiful siberian tiger
Almost unseen in nature, but when seen, you spark a fire
Giving way to instinct, in my bodies every wire

For all things beutifull, there is a risk to take
Butyou've got to take it all, not a little, not a flake
I gladly risk it, i give you me, what'll you make!?

A burning love!? enough to change your coat
Or a radiating ice, stopping every ship or boat
To hide in nature, to go through life, to cruise, to float!?

I pray the first to the latter, for i am fuel not fire
I pray you put a match to me, not freeze me with mire
Lets please melt the caps with the love we conspire

Embrace the instict, don't turn cold
Natures given you a great hand, please dont throw or foldWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Again, really, really great writing!. I hope you have this much passion in life, because, if you do, you'll be able to go far!. This has a ton of wonderful metaphors and hidden meanings in it, and i really enjoy an author that gives me the challenge of unraveling every nuance!. Wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a very pretty poem!. Very Passionate! I like it!.;>Www@QuestionHome@Com