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Question: What do you think of this poem/song iv been writing!?
You touched my heart
you took my breath

You were the love that was the best

You kept me stand’n, here on the ground
You were the bond that kept me around

So there we go, there and then
In that world that seemed pretend
I can’t explain
The way you made me feel
the feeling was so unreal
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But…
You broke my heart
you made me bleed
you were the pain I didn’t need

You were the chains, which kept me bound
you were the hand that weighed me down

So here we are, here and now
In this world that seems so foul
I can’t explain
The way it is today
The sky is turning grey
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But…
You warmed my heart
you gave me life
you were the love i couldn't fight

you were the reason why i lived
you were the baby, and i was the crib


(oh and that last lines only creepy if you make it creepy)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I really love that poem it's really good!.!. have you done anymore like that!?


i write poetry too i tihnk it's a great way to express yourselfWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!.!.!.
I too am a writter, I write lyrics and poetry as well!.
below you will find a link to my latest poetry!.
Although, im not too sure about the last line!.!.!.

http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.

I wrote this one real fast, please excuse the minor mistakes!.!.!. also, please comment!. I would love to hear your opnion!.
Thanks! Good day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats nice you got some talent dude keep it upWww@QuestionHome@Com

Keep going I really like your stuffWww@QuestionHome@Com