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Question: A poem called Sin, named after my contact Sin!?
Sin
By S!.F!. Reborn

Souls giving
In to
Nature and flesh

Standing alone
Immersed in Earthly
Negotiations

Yet the Sin I speak of is not like these
Not like the evil that awaits mankind
The Sin I speak of is not a disease
Seeking to corrupt our bloodlines

She
Invites us to
New ideas

Surely she's
Impressed many
Network friends

She is SinWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Awwww heck, guys!. Semper, thank you!. You honor me with your skill and poetic verse!. Hugs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, wow and wow!. Once again you have WOWed me!. You have the power of the pen and in a way that amazes me!. Purely genius!. There is no "sin" in this poem!.
Peace & Love :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sin is setting standards here in the Poetry Section!. She has a big heart, that is showing her the words to put down!.
Let us all listen to her heart!.
Semper, ya got me going on this one! Good Poem!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see you have interspersed some Acrostic stanzas; interesting!.

Overall, the poem succeeds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well done again!.I can imagine she will be thrilled!.You have caught her inner beauty,And her outer beauty ain`t bad either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is hard to resist Sin!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Again, you have captured the essence of a fellow poet!
Good weekend, Semper!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know Sin but I like the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very kind of you

Thanks SFR (note SFR lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well Done!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

So glad to see this, though
I am not surprised
Never have I seen her lack luster!.

maWww@QuestionHome@Com