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Question: A poem called Sin, named after my contact Sin!?
Sin
By S!.F!. Reborn
Souls giving
In to
Nature and flesh
Standing alone
Immersed in Earthly
Negotiations
Yet the Sin I speak of is not like these
Not like the evil that awaits mankind
The Sin I speak of is not a disease
Seeking to corrupt our bloodlines
She
Invites us to
New ideas
Surely she's
Impressed many
Network friends
She is SinWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Awwww heck, guys!. Semper, thank you!. You honor me with your skill and poetic verse!. Hugs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, wow and wow!. Once again you have WOWed me!. You have the power of the pen and in a way that amazes me!. Purely genius!. There is no "sin" in this poem!.
Peace & Love :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sin is setting standards here in the Poetry Section!. She has a big heart, that is showing her the words to put down!.
Let us all listen to her heart!.
Semper, ya got me going on this one! Good Poem!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I see you have interspersed some Acrostic stanzas; interesting!.
Overall, the poem succeeds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well done again!.I can imagine she will be thrilled!.You have caught her inner beauty,And her outer beauty ain`t bad either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is hard to resist Sin!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Again, you have captured the essence of a fellow poet!
Good weekend, Semper!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I don't know Sin but I like the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very kind of you
Thanks SFR (note SFR lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well Done!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
So glad to see this, though
I am not surprised
Never have I seen her lack luster!.
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