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I don't think its kind of a prosa or a poem, I need comments on what it contains!.
it was when we were returning from a trip and I was inspired by the rain

***It rains and it rains***
on the front screen of the bus
I see the rain drops
In the early winter there has been rain,
lots of wind and a little warm,
now after the cold day there it rains
from the window I see outside
the trees and bushes seem as were bought
from the marcket of nature
to be desired and to be envied of
I wonder how it would have been
If I was out in those woods,
under that rain, dancing, singing,
unaware of the world outside
un aware of myself
no one to desturb, no one
to destruct my thoughts
If I could close my mind
If I could not think anything
If I could only dance
If I could lose myself in the rain
smelt in the raindrops
If I got lost in the fresh
earth mixed with rain
If I could jump and run
on the mud with the speed of drops and on the rythem of its sound
could lose myself into the countless drops of the rain!.
I wonder how great it would feel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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