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Question: Rate my poem 1-10 what should the title be!?
drops fall from the cloudy sky
cold appears inside
anxiety shows in your face
your soul is corrupted by the fear
the sun doesn′t warm your body
the silence doesn′t calm you
the colours pass away
the darkness calls you
like a specter
that walks in loneliness
seeing the world
and you can′t conceal
that this isn′t your placeWww@QuestionHome@Com


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Forever!. 9!.5/10 Put it to music a Classical Mozart sonata!. Sing it slow and sadly! That's the way people like poetry today!.!.!.with music!.
Replace "you", "your" with "I", "my", "me", etc!.
Keep writing!.!.!.write some more poems/songs now!Www@QuestionHome@Com

8, I take it your format is free verse well since free verse has no format I can't give you any clear advice, but I thought it was very good!. Hmmm a title, well titles are the hardest part of any poem sometimes, being that there are a thousand ways your title can be!. Um I'd pick maybe Darkness's Grasp, being that the subject is suddenly changed!. A title can only work when its chosen by the creator, remember that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

O my soul, your happiness has faded away
The darkness within has stolen the day

From 1 to 10, why do I choose seven
Is it because I would be rather in heaven!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

8 im not sure about the title
but i think its really good! keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com