This is another quick poem,, do I have something here or should i abandon it? Is

Question: This is another quick poem,, do I have something here or should i abandon it!? Is it good!?

Plans unravled
Once spinning

Chance on cloud nine
Destroyed when our engines fell

Wanting to wish good luck
But think I need it more

When it was going alright
The b***h got a hold of me
And now its down hillWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Start paddling!. You have to look for new phrases!. The old cliches are dull, unless you can bend them to mean something else!. also, check your word usage because the Spell Chic doesn't know when the word is a real one!.!.!.like 'fell' maybe!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't abandon it, needs a little more re-working!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it seems like your emotions got the best of you with it like try to revise it a little and have it rhymeWww@QuestionHome@Com