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Question: FEEDBACK ON MY POEM PLZ!!?
My Mission

I'm not psychotic, I'm not going mad
I'm simply searching for what I once had
I don't need your help, I don't need your guidance
You say I'm sick in the head, but why should I buy this
I just need love, why don't you understand it
I'm not a forceful person, so no, I won't demand it
Therapy won't help, there's nothing you can do
It's a part of life, and yes, I'll make it through
I sacrificed my chance for a much better cause
To provide the time needed, to correct all of my flaws
I'm not like most guys, my goal is not, to get you in bed
I'd much rather get to know you, and what's going on in your head
You're not like most girls, you're not predictable or easy
I don't even care if you think what I write is cheesy
I like a challenge, and to me, that's what you are
Which is why you're worth, every bit of my lonely heart
You're far away so I can't just send you some letter
And hope that you feel the same, and that you'll make my life better
It's more complicated, and the story goes deeper
It's not that I blew my first chance and now I'm trying to keep her
But instead, I'm simply trying to do everything right
I don't think she'll love me for a poem, it's too blind of a sight
But I hope these poems will guide her, so she knows how I feel
I'm not trying to get with her, these feelings are real
It'll take lots of time, I'm sure, and I have no doubt
But I would like to think that the point of it all, isn't left out
The point is that I love you, and I'd like you to know
But I never told you, before I had to go
But soon I'll be back, and I'll try it again
I don't have an issue with calling you my friend
But getting the message across is my mission!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this poem is very sweet !.!.!.!.!.!.!. like not many males would express themselves or be willing to take the time to get to know a females mind i think its awesome that your able to express it and good luck at getting her!.!.!. she would be lucky to have you Www@QuestionHome@Com

Chris P!.
Nice expression of your feelings towards someone very special to your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think thats really beautiful, what a lucky girl this is about
but i think you need to end it a bit different
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sweet!. must be a really good story there!. care to share it!? why can't you be with her!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! OMG It is like the best poem I've ever read and it is so deep!. That would really get me if I was the girl!. But just one more thing , i think that this amazing poem should have kind of a wrapped up ending like maybe someway that you know its an ending a little more i mean it is wonderful and deep and beautiful but you should try moe of an ending =]Www@QuestionHome@Com