How is my "Umbrella singing" poem...? otteri selvakumar?

Question: How is my "Umbrella singing" poem!.!.!.!? otteri selvakumar!?

Rain miss

The umbrella

In side of

Rain!.!.!.

Not rain heavy!.!.!.

Drops of

Rains!.!.!.

Catching umbrella

With out!.!.!.

Inside the rain!.!.!.

Umbrella nice singing!.!.!.

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This one is almost is good as your "sex with flowers" poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com