Comments if you will on this poem?

Question: Comments if you will on this poem!?

Good really does overcome evil, you know
even if in the midst you can't tell
battle waged between love and
pointless hate
fought long
ago
love won
(smile)

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Sounds like it was written just for me Ma!.!.It reminded of me and brother in law who fought and detested each other now i guess all hate has washed through the water and down the river!. Thanks very good and a reminder of when hate was bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know by now that I have a soft spot for simplicity!.
For me, a simple word is like naked truth!. We may not like the look of it, but we cant deny its power and versatility!. So powerful that we sometimes hide from it behind all sorts of masks and disguises!.
What is simpler than water, the smell of fresh bread, and a baby's smile!.
Life was meant to be simple ( not complicated)!. Simple imagery means truth (naked)!.
Nice read, ma!

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no offense to bit talay, but good poems don't have to rhyme!. all they have to do is to have expressive feelings!. i think that poem is awesome and i would consider sharing it with others!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Children on here, that don't seem to know different forms of poetry!. Simple and a good message!. Thank you for being here and for all the positive things you bring to this siteWww@QuestionHome@Com

Smile
Love won
long fought
battle waged, good vs evil
When wrong and right got confused
The goodness in all overcame and flourished!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.!.!. I like it!

Good deal !.!.!.!. short, sweet and to the point!.

Happy Thanksgiving Ma? !

xoxo
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Ma, you always know what to say and what to write!. Thanks for the wisdom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

and I've been saved by Grace!.

Lovely, as always!.x!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your verse speaks the truth in a beautifully simple, honest way!. Lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

umm!.!.!.it doesnt umm!.!.!. rhyme!.!.!.but umm the word are uh good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very simple!!! Very stark!!!! Where is the imagination!? Good words are not enough!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sweet, simple and to the point!. Amen!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi what a fab poem hugs Www@QuestionHome@Com

The simple truth is,Ma,,, Ya hit a home run!!

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this reminds me of an old saying!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.evil only triumphs!.!.!.

!.!.!.when good men fail!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.to do something!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very strong and meaningful!.!.!.

howd i get in poetry!? bad influenceWww@QuestionHome@Com

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its what i needed at this exact moment!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.thank u

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