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Question: Your comments on this poem, please!?
Old lady awakens to preparations at hand
readies herself for Thanksgiving fare
but family is scattered across the states
today there will be nobody there

Sets mixing bowl atop kitchen counter
paring down recipe to feed only two
sadly she turns to reach for ingredients
from pantry she knows will be bare

Returns to crack egg over rim of bowl
instead to amazed delight she finds
virtual world must have invaded
filling bowl to the brim with love
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hey ma!.!.!.thanks for that!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just to know that you are not alone!. How could you feel lonely having such a virtual world of friends and lovable contacts from all around the world!?! One drop of love from each, 'd (drown) the whole kitchen into seas of emotions!. Again you are not a lone and should never feel lonely!.
Enjoy the holiday, every moment counts!.
Have fun, lucky gorgeous lady! Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with your first answerer!.!.!.!.sad, but beautiful!. I hope you have as happy a day as possible under the circumstances!.!.!.!.and I hope some of your friends from the virtual world can share some of it with you!.

(((ma)))Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wait!.!.!.I've got something in my eye!.!.!.!.
My heart fills with and pours out love for you, ma, and all of the rest of the "family!."

Thank goodness for the internet!. Tyler will join us on the big screen at my uncle's house!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is both sad and beautiful!.!.!.If it is a reflection upon your thanksgiving,I am sorry that you cannot be with all your family!.!.!.!. Have a good one :) Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thanksgiving Day brings many cheers, some unusual!. Happy Thanksgiving to you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats ironic because I live close to extended family who I visit for a second and then I avoid them and go and get tipsyWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's a tear jerker Ma!. So sad you wont be with family!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have to suffer through two dinners!.!.!.I'll make it!.!.!.

Happy Thanksgiving, ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank you again Ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thanks for thinking of us, we will enjoy it!. I wish you a pleasant Thanksgiving!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wish you could all be here in the cool sunshine! But you are here in my heart! Happy Thanksgiving!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

welcome to my life, im never with family and I lke it that way nowWww@QuestionHome@Com

Delicious poem!. I know my love is in that bowl!.

Happy Thanksgiving to you!Www@QuestionHome@Com