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Question: Here is my poem/rap/rhyme please rate 1-10!? What do you think!?
So What Now!?

Every time it comes to mind where do we go after!?
Does the book come to an end or do we see another chapter
Is there an immediate change!?
Does our soul go insane!?
And if **** does happen, who are we to blame
You see as life goes on the pieces come together
Why am I here, when I can’t stay forever!?
All about game, human nature won’t let it be equal
Life’s got two sequence’s and we just living the prequel
This isn’t a poem it’s a message to humanity
Psychopaths growing up with the presence of insanity
Preachers preaching sermons from the belief of Christianity
The end is coming and we don’t got a lot of time
Put on earth for one reason, one reason, to Rhyme!.
Quote after quote Im being told what to do
“Don’t act like your not”, yea like I never knew
Im tired of followings directions, Im suppose to guide myself
Life’s laid out on the table with destiny set on the shelf!.
Just Imagine the last supper without breaking that bread
Or the fact that sin is still alive and faith is still dead
Now picture a white rose overtime turning red
“Forgive and forget” go ahead quote that instead
Through the essence of my thoughts, I steer an importance for change
The divine meaning of poetry soaked in the palms of the strange
Reminiscing on the euphoric world in which we thrived on
Disregarding the fact, that we have yet survived dawn
Feeling the mist of our lost questions, still hungry for inquisition
Hearing the sounds of slight happiness, still famished for submission
And here we are absorbing thoughts on how to answer time
A victim to the question yet the guilt of the crime!.

Ozhen Amin ?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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