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"Bullets"

Machine guns spit bullets at innocence!.
Lives they did not own thrown dead to the ground!.
Wild and righteous in bent minds with vengeance!.
Revenge lay bleeding or dead on the ground!.

Torn flesh bleeding!.
Gaping holes and lifeless, wounded
Terror screamed from heavy fire!.
Empty casings remain!.

And time dripped slowly in the background,
As murderous rage raped a safe haven!.
Confusion and fear ran for freedom as
Machine guns spit bullets at innocence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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This is one powerful write!! It really makes Me sick that in this day and age,these things are still going on,world wide! WELL PEOPLE EVER LEARN!! You would think after hitler,people would have learned enough to realize that senseless killing,solves nothing!! This world needs to grow up and act like the adults,that they think they are! Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the message, and the humane intention behind it!
terror is terror, anywhere any time!. Killing is the biggest crime
against the human race!. No religion agrees to such act of violence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Strong imagery on this very current event

On the technical side, S1L3 has an extra syllable, did you try
"Wild and righteous, bent minds with vengeance"!?

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I watched in horror for hours today,
but the news anchors failed to present
the tragedy in India as powerfully as this!.

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Very powerful, something we should really think on!. Very moving!.

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Powerful!. Poignant!. Appropriate!. Well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a great poem, but I don't like thinking about it (what happened)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Send it to NRA!. They'll love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i ? it! great work!Www@QuestionHome@Com