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Question: How's my Christmas poem!?
Hey, I'm writing a christmas poem 4 my mom!.!. and ya I wana know if it sounds good and any suggestions are welcome to improve it!. TAHNK YOU!!

Title:: "Christmas"

The snow falls down in patterns of white, Beutiful blankets of snow!. Chrismas carols fill the air, wrapped around the chrismas tree!. Snowballs are thrown and snowman are built!. Angels sing on high!. The giving of gifts, the joy of christmas!. Santa's sleigh bells ring!. THe children sing! Merry Christmas to all and to all a good night!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
im sorry but i don't really like it!.!.!. its not very Original :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

You spelled beautiful, Christmas, snowmen, The, and some other stuff wrong!. It blows massive penis anyways!.Www@QuestionHome@Com