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Question: Critique My New Poem: Winter Rainy Day!?
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Winter Rainy Day

It is raining hard
It is cold and windy
The dark clouds
hanging over the sky
It is winter day
The gloom fills the air
It is raining for hours
The sun behind the clouds
have disappeared
The blue sky has turned gray
It is winter day
Winter is magical time of the year
When winter shed it’s tears
It’s full of emotions
Bringing water
To our lakes and reservoirs
One way to thank
The winter rainy day


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good job :)

read my poem!? thanks!
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