Ok first haiku, or is it?

Question: Ok first haiku, or is it!?

is this a haiku!?
Tribes of stars shine proud
My heart screams out
I am one of you
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Sorry, but you still don't quite have it! You have 8 syllables in the second line!. Use "Don't" instead of "Do not" and it will be right!Www@QuestionHome@Com

no I'm afraid not
you use seven syllables
then use just five more

5
7
5

Haiku is a Japanese verse form that relies on brevity and simplicity to convey its message!. It is usually three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, and frequently includes natural images or themes!. It is believed to have been first written in the seventeenth century and is based on a Zen Buddhist philosophy of simplicity and the idea of perfection that excludes the extraneous!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no, in a haiku, there are 5 syllables in the first and last line and 7 syllables in the second line!.

for example:

Tribes of stars shine proud
My heart screams out very loud
I am one of youWww@QuestionHome@Com

its not a haiku!.
It should be like this:
sentence 1 has 5 syllables
sentence 2 has 7 syllables
sentence 3 has 5 syllablesWww@QuestionHome@Com

No its not a haiku!.
The syllables are:
First line: 5
Second line: 7
Third line: 5

You have:
1: 5
2: 4
3: 5Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is now! it's really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com