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Question: Rate this poem for me!!?!!?
hi!.!. can anybody rate this acrostic poem!?!?
It would be highly APPRECIATED!.!.
so, here it goes:
W hen you call me baby
H ave u known now that it makes me so crazy!?
E lated by your sweet lie
L etting me go was your greatest try!.
D o you know how much it hurts,
A t a room filled with thousand fears
N o one comes to wipe my shed of tears!?
A nd now, you really cause my heart to break when I see u around as she flirts!
!.!.!.!.
there you have it!.!.
rate this out for me plz!.!.
I'll be waitin'!
muah*Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I pick 8 on a scale 1-10
I can almost follow you, sounds like a heart crushed by deceitful lies and no one to turn to!. It sounds deep and leaves the reader wondering what will happen from here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You found a loved one in a lie with another girl!. you gave your all to this person and when they left they took it all!. "letting me go was your greatest try!." sounds like he tried to leave you but you loved him to much and wouldnt let him leave!. Your alone now and you have images of him and her!.
deep, good, sad!. like it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's cute !.!.!. is Wheldana a person's name!?
Some of the English isn't correct, and that makes it a bit hard to read!. The rhythm could use some work, too!. Concentrate on your tenses !.!.!. the first two lines COULD go something like this:
W hen you called me baby
H ow it made me crazy
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10/10!
wow! it's sooo goood
i like it :)
where'd you get your inspiration!?
i wanna do a good poem like that too~~~
DXWww@QuestionHome@Com
Awww!.!.!. I like it! 1 through 10, I'm guessing!? I give it an 8! n_nWww@QuestionHome@Com
yuukiWww@QuestionHome@Com