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Question: HOW'S MY PEOM!?!?!? BE HONEST!?
HOW DO YOU FIND THIS POEM THAT I WROTE AT SCHOOL:
I ONCE WAS A CABBAGE,
AND MY COLOUR WAS TERACOTTA!.
I WHINED BEHIND THE PINE TREE,
AND IT NEVER TURNED PROPER!.
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I like the cacophony in the first two linesWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is O!.k but it is not deep enough to be a short poem!. Try and enlarge it, add a few verses!.
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Lose the CAPS, it's not half bad,Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is!.!.!.I don't know!. Can you explain it because I couldn't draw any understanding of it in my mind!!Www@QuestionHome@Com