A poem i wrote. What do you think of it ?

Question: A poem i wrote!. What do you think of it !?

My Time Machine

Cold numbness envelops all warmth and light
Emptiness plagues my mind with blunt pain
Alone, emotion void, I fade into the night
My reality, stained grey with endless rain

Desperate and confused, beaten by defeat
Intrinsically pained with human weakness
I hate myself further with every bite I eat
My mind torn between itself and my sickness

As the darkness consumes my futile soul
A bright beam of hope emerges
Alone in my time machine, I pray to feel whole
It reaches inside my throat, my sins, it purges

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

WOW!.!.!.!. this is deep!.!.!.
wow omg i could never write something like this:) its EPIC lol!!!! ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very sad but I feel I really know how the person{you}feel!.Because of the emotions!. I think you should take the second line with "Forever I hope my mind has no feel but the pain is there!. Or something like that!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you little liar!.!.!.about a month ago somone other than you posted this same poem!.!.!.why the f*ck do people try and take the credit of somone else work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very dark but i think i heard this before!. its ok for a person thats emotional!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"emotion void, I fade into the night!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

well you're certinally more gifted at poems than me!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Too heavy for meWww@QuestionHome@Com

i really love this!. its deep!. great job!.

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Omg I love it!<3Www@QuestionHome@Com

its well written!. i dont know what else to say!.
xoxoWww@QuestionHome@Com

I honestly think it sounds a bit on the common side!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow ur rly good
keep writing pleaseWww@QuestionHome@Com