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Position:Home>Poetry> What kind of stuff do you write when you are tired...? Answers are Optional !?Question: What kind of stuff do you write when you are tired!.!.!.!? Answers are Optional !!? Come sit by the fire with me Indulge in a glass of this wine Put your arm around me gently You make me feel divine Kick your shoes off The radios playing The wine goes down smooth I think you are staying Oh listen to this song It’s my favourite that’s playing We get up to dance But end up only swaying We fall to the floor On a nice furry rug Where we snuggle A little bit more !.!.!.Please tell me You do not snore!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Mellow and fine!.!.!.like a really fine wine!. Did you first dine!? You know how men whine!. It seems you fell for his line!. As you lay there, supine!. Your poem is Divine!. Nothing here to refine!. Omg somebody shut me up!. To answer your Q, this is what I write when I am tired!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Excuse me for suggesting an improvement!.!.!.!. We fall to the floor On a nice furry rug Where we cuddle A little more snug While we are down here Come closer, some more But!.!.!.please, please tell me You do not snore! I like the mood and progression of this!. Smooooothe and seductive! Nice tired effort, fun last line!Www@QuestionHome@Com This is so mellow!.!.!.so me! I love it!. good work! read mine!? thanks! http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |