Are these good? (short poems i wrote)?

Question: Are these good!? (short poems i wrote)!?

okay therese are some poems i wrote, are they good!.

1!.
broken hearts, little things!. what i deserve ill finally get!. i let you down and turned my back, now im wishing for one more chance!.

2!.
another day, just more pain
a couple bruises that'll soon go away
but the memories of what you did will forever stay with me
no you cant fix this, sorry isnt enough
this pain is too much for your words to take awayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i think they're really good!. you've got talent and know how to word things!. that's something a lot of people *i!.e!. me* have no idea how to do!. lol ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com

They're alright!.!. sounds like verses from an upcomming song!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah I agree they sound very songy!.!.!.thats cool!.

Read my poem!? Thanks!
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Keep up the good work! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i really like it !!! 1 is awsome!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

they are good!.i like them both!.number one is real goodWww@QuestionHome@Com