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Question: I am thinking about being a poet !?
& ii was wondering if ii can get everyone's opinion on 3 or 4 of my poems!.

* one has been published in young teen poetry!.

Strange Love ?

How could this happen
How could this be real
Is there any other way to feel
He got up and left me without a word
“I hate you” is all I heard
As I lay in bed and wept
Upon me the voices crept
He never loved you, he never will
As I noticed a note on my window sill
“The way I said goodbye hurt me too
Just always remember I love you
So keep this note near your hand
For that is always where I will stand
Keep my thoughts in your heart
Then nothing can ever tear us apart”
As I lay in bed and wept
Upon me the voices crept
He always loved you, he always will
At that I looked out my window sill
To dream of the day we will be together
And think of the love that will last forever

Those Days ?

As I lay in bed with nothing but tears
I look back and think of the years
When school was fun
Because it was something new
Now we think of it as something to do
We hate our teacher
And hate our lives
And everything we hear, is nothing but lies
We fight our parents
We fight our friends
And you always have to follow the trends
Is there nothing to do
Can something please change
Why do those years seem so strange
When we all had something new to do
Like ride a bike or tie a shoe
But that’d be too simple
Life has to be rough
How do you think grandpa got so tough

The Confession ?

That one email she will never forget
The main reason she lost the bet
She told him everything late at night
The moment of course, felt just right!.
She professed, I will love you forever!.
He simply replied, I will never!.
She coughed a goodbye and hung up the phone!.
Thanking God, She was alone
She fell on her bed and cried herself to sleep
Inside her heart, her feelings she must keep!.
Because these two were friends!. The best at that!.
In her bed for a week she sat!.
Reminiscing on life and the way things were!.
That first day he laid eyes on her!.
She could not forget his deep blue eyes!.
As she writes this poem and cries!.
Oh, all the things I would do!.
To be that girl lying next to you!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
well believe me you are a poet !.!.!. no need for our opinions about ur writings !.!.!. u r absolutely talented //
i found a touch of melancholy in ur poems , i think that suffering is really important in shaping the poet and giving true feelings to his/her poem !.!.!.!.but i wish u to have a happy live !.!.!. best of luck Www@QuestionHome@Com

Go for it man!. Like the clouds high above, the sky is the limit for you expressing yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com