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Question: Hoping to be better than my first one, what do you think of it!?
I can feel it
The pace of my heart
The wholeness within
It fills the void
Those fears are gone
I can finally breathe
Finally its getting better
My pain eases
You came in my life
Oh so sudden
My life is changed
Forever, this I am sure
I can not doubt this
The dust is clearing
My heart is opening
Never again I promised
But your words
They say everything
My ears, and my heart
They hold on
Through your eyes
You don't see a reflection
My past means nothing
You make me seeWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is wonderful to feel love again after a loss!.
It is obvious to me, that your hesitation is there yet your heart wants to feel the emotion!.
Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sweet!. It's really nice!. You are good at writing poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com