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when i am lost to never be found but always caught by rain on the ground when i cry i cry with myself but no matter what the sky cries as well when it hurts i feel the pain i also feel the cold of rain when i am blind and im alone i turn to see rain on my window i know this one sucks i wrote it a few months ago i kno the rythm is completely off and i know its pretty stupid but i decided 2 post it anywaysWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really really like it It's short, sweet and nice Good work, if this one sucks for you, you must be very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com I really like the theme of the poem!. The only issue I would have is the end end of some of the stanza's don't seem to flow well into the last line!. I love it thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com |