Would Anyone Please Look At My Poem?

Question: Would Anyone Please Look At My Poem!?

If you tell me that you love me
A million times a day
I'll never quite believe you
But I'll listen anyway
My heart's been broken way to much
To let you in at the first touch
Cause maybe this is just a crush
And you tell me that you love me
A million times a day
So maybe I believe you
But I swear I'll never sayWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I like how simple it is, its sort of a wearing your heart on your sleeve type deal, which is appropriate because it's a love poem!. But I would maybe separate it into stanzas that are four lines long each, so add another one in somewhere in what would be the middle stanza!? (My heart's been broken way too much, to let you in at the first touch, cause maybe this is just a crush) Your rhyme scheme in the beginning and end is ABCB, but in the middle it changes to CCC, which sounds awkward!. So I would, like I said before, add another line to that, and change the rhyme scheme to match!. Sorry!.!. was that confusing!.!.!? If it is say so, I usually look back at questions I answer pretty often so I'll see it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think your poem is very beautiful and you artistically put your feelings into something beautiful!. I like!. Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

umm!.!.!.trite and predictable!. catchy, good be a good pop song!. but shows no deep emotion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its very good, I would change the end to: So maybe I believe you and maybe I'm here to stayWww@QuestionHome@Com