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Question: A sonnet or a whimsical waltz !? Will you be the judge!?
Into the forest, under the full moon
Paths meandering, endlessly long
Erstwhile symphonic, pulsating tune
Inhabiting creature’s petulant song

Draws me enthralled into depths, enchanted
Magnetically pulling me deeper yet
Following starlight, evening has planted
Before me the clearing with mist beset

To edge of the clearing, focus is drawn
Handsomely rugged, eyes gleaming with fire
Music crescendos, I study his brawn
Gravitate, slowly, towards hearts desire

Meeting at axis, with full moon above
Embracing parlaying, led into dance
Acquiescent, interminable, pure love
I, out of the corner, my eye, did glance

Surrounding us strongly ringed we were
By the glowing eyes of Wolves observing
Their presence in this place made my heart stir
When to others ‘twould be quite unnerving

Now, waking at daybreak, safe in warm bed
The scents and the sounds remain in my head
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I not sure it's a sonnet, but the description of this dance for two is breathtaking! Very beautiful waltz!. Dance on!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know!. I always thought of a sonnet having fourteen lines!. This would be pretty scary in our day, but it is a beautiful dream, a whimsical waltz!.Www@QuestionHome@Com