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Question: I have this poem i need help finishing it!?
The light of the sun
The dark from the moon
All work together to!.!.!.!.!.

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The light of the sun
The dark from the moon
All work together to
Inspire me and youWww@QuestionHome@Com

You don't have much of a beginning!.
To write a poem effectively I first write down the idea, feeling, event, etc!.!.!. that I want to capture with the poem!. Then I think about it for a while (sometimes days) and write whatever comes to mind!.
Your poem seems to start with very opposite subjects; the sun and the moon, light and dark and you say next that they are working together to!.!.!.
What comes next!? You need a subject, not a list of romantic sounding things or stuff that all rhyme or sound good together!.
The subject of a poem is rarely portrayed as merely an object!. Instead poems are about what makes something what-it-is!. An event, a person, place, thing, animal, emotion, anything you could ever think of; those cannot be described with cliched attributes!. Think about your subject until in your mind you have boiled it down to the very core; the meaning of the subject that is so pure that it cannot be bound to one language, the subject itself instead of a crude analogy or description!. That is what you want to write about!.
If you'd like to email me with more information on the poem you are trying to write I'd be more than happy to help you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com