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Question: What do you think of this poem written by me!? !?
Sweet Sleep at Last
The wind blows hard,
The sky ripe!.
The ground from under my feet disappears,
And I fall towards the blight!.
The past flashes in front of my eyes,
Faded memories alike!.
I fall from the heavens,
Seeing freedom below,
The ground just a barrier to cross,
Death just a toll booth!.
The note that bid the world farewell for me
Now flies in the sky,
A few feet above the ground,
I see my final send off,
The world is a blur,
Color losing from the sky!.
I had bid in my note,
Heavens witness my cremation,
That I be laid beneath the starry sky!.
The world is a blur,
For the last time,
I close my eyes!.




i wrote this poem when i felt this period of calm and peace, like there was noting more to achieve in my life now, a journey full can complete!.
what do you think of it!? and would you like to read something more of my work!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi ,am newcomer to your QR and just wondering what u were smoking right then ;-)

Its well written !.!.!.I feel nostalgia ,a sadness but then it can be my state of mind !.!.!.!.!.dnt really know!.!.!.!.
just waiting to read more and more of indian poetry for as far as I can see , its not very crowdy or boistorous!. ByeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Inspied from some renowed lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

if ur lying then i can't say anything about it ,but if itz true then man u r truly brilliant this poem had touched my heart excellent poemsWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think its so wonderful and of course ido like to read more of your workWww@QuestionHome@Com