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Question: 10 points if you tell me what this poem is about!!?
Everything still
Calm
Serenity
Peaceful monotony
A one sided struggle
Gentle swaying
Rocking back and forth

The normal chaos is gone
No people squealing
No limbs flailing
Everything just feels so good

Like a purposeful machine
Operated in solitude
The sound of rhythmic thumping
Well oiled parts connecting
A lone piston pumping
The rest
Is
Cold

But the task must be completed with haste!
The act must be finished
No time to waste
Before rigor mortis sets in
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
As ugly as it sounds, it sounds like necrophilia!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i was going to say it's about death and the struggle to continue the process of creating life before death sets in!.!.

but now that i've re-read it!.!.!.!. it seems to be talking about the act of having sex with a corpse!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ocean!.
People have drowned
Talking about the heart stopping
Removing bodies before rigor mortis

basically drowning people in the ocean!.
That's what I see anywayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like the person is injured and dying and is describing the feeling as he/she slips awayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Desire to do one last thing before you die so that you can achieve peace!.

My opinion anyway!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Trying to revive someone who is comatose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its about a guy raping a fresh dead bodyWww@QuestionHome@Com