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Question: Do you believe experiences expressed in this poem really happen!?
Flight Confirmed

The last sensation felt
before sleep arrived
was my body sinking
into the mattress
as though being
pushed down
then a
lightness of being

I was here and then
I was there
three thousand miles away
in the blink an eye
a wrinkle of time

Looking

His six foot two frame
sprawled on the floor
the smell of vomit
barely more putrid
than the smell
of booze

Alone

Still

Gone

The luxury of
holding his head
was not afforded
nor were tears
allowed

Only a silent scream

I awakened
before the phone
confirmed
what
spirit's flight
revealed

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A congregation of wise thought can be prophetic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes it could happen; but I believe that the title needs to be replaced; because at the end; the flight was indeed, NOT CONFIRMED!. If it were; they would not be able to tell the story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am a believer!.
I can feel the pain of others who are very closely joined to me!.
I have premonitions, this is so sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This has never happened to me but yes I believe this could happen to someone!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I think it can!. Kind of spooky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com