I would bleed for you
I have
bled
for you
yet you turn your back
ingrate
drink
to death
unaccountable
to all
fine
I'm gone
and pray for your soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I have bled for you yet you turn your back ingrate drink to death unaccountable to all fine I'm gone and pray for your soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: In the mirror I am seeing unveiled anger, frustration creating hostility!.Www@QuestionHome@Com DEFINITELY REFLECTS FRUSTRATION!. SEEMS AS IF THEY GAVE UP ON LOVING THE PERSON!. IT SEEMS AS IF THEY WERE IN AN ABUSIVE RELATIONSHIP AND THAT THE PERSON DOING THE ABUSING WAS AN ALCOHOLIC AND HAD A MISHAP AND OVER DRANK AND THAT THE PERSON WHO WAS BEING ABUSED IS NOT TO BLAME AND THAT THEY ARE FREE OF THE RAGE AND THEY STILL FIND IT IN THEIR HEART TO PRAY FOR THE ABUSER!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your poem is ok but not great!. Luckely I have composed a haiku for you: Frustration Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahh! Ahhhhh! Www@QuestionHome@Com It does not reflect frustration sounds like it reflects loving someone or missing someoneWww@QuestionHome@Com It sounds more like an inability to deal with rejection!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm getting anger, disgust, and betrayal!.Www@QuestionHome@Com a bit!. but it seems more regreet and want!. and like an "im finished' but not really freustrated!. more calm and like a final cryWww@QuestionHome@Com Not really!. It's seems more like after frustration and the act of giving up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com no sos more simpathyWww@QuestionHome@Com Sounds like a list of words!.!. elaboration would be good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |