Rate my Poem: The Forest?

Question: Rate my Poem: The Forest!?

The forest is a kingdom,
with its lucious trees and sweet smell,
It houses a bounty of animals,
gentle and fierce alike,
When I walk through this forest,
I only find glee,
for it brings me to my senses,
and gives me the courage to perservere!.
Away from the hustle,
away from the stress,
the forest brings me back,
and I am myself!.
Its sweet pine smell,
Its lasting impreesion,
All give me courage,
for it gives me peace!.
The forest,
my favorite place,
my peace,
my salvation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i thought that was really good!
I just think it should go more in depth
like something more real than 'the sweet pine smell'
plus u used 'sweet smell' twice' in the poem
But overall i liked it
the last 3 lines are very well writtenWww@QuestionHome@Com

I would change "I only find glee" to "I find only glee" and impression--may have been a typo but just to let you know--should be impression!.

I personally absolutely love the forest and the trees; the isolation of the world, but I didn't quite feel a tugging spark!. Nonetheless, it was ok!.

I would give it an 8 of 10!.

-Morbid PoetWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is a good poem, but you should add some onomatopoeia and metaphors!. Do not use too many similes!.
I like this poem!. Very interesting, creative, wonderful, and best of all unique!. Try improving some of the lines!. But I can say that you're a good poet!. Www@QuestionHome@Com