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Question: What does this poem mean to you ( i wrote it)!?

i wrote it for my ex bf who hates me now but i still love him him ALOT


Thanks A Million


I feel the time has come,
for you to listen,
for i am numb,
and very deeply broken,
i have always wanted a good outcome,
for we where always well woven,
you are very welcome,
to have been my companion,
all i can say is "thanks a million"





by the way i am a 13y!.o!. girl
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm 13 too and this is really great, i just broke up with my bf today, or rather he broke up with me, cause he likes my best friend!. So I feel like CRAP! But yeah, this is really good!. If you wanna hear mine or just wanna talk, email me, AquaNature10@yahoo!.comWww@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty good!. (just f!.y!.i!. fifth line from the bottom, you have 'where', but I think you meant 'were')

The end makes it sound like you're being a little sarcastic, which you may or may not have been going for!.

And if he really does hate you!.!.!.he's not worth your time, so cheer up!. You'll meet someone better soon, I bet :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very creative I give you an A!.Www@QuestionHome@Com