I tried a poem on society before and it was not so good!. I am good at writing about darker thymes or nature!. You can look at my previous poems if you are bored!. Could you give me advice on how to improve it or should I just stick at what I am good at!? It is nice to try new styles!. The same formula is boring!. Even if it is good!.
Summers Gone
For its blurry like a dream when your eyes are half closed,
The studious stay in their room and learn of a different world,
There is but a stumble as I a waken from the dark,
Left is a light but shall it be quenched with dust of lost jobs,
I cease to cry as I watch the bitter news,
Sitting on my bed listening to music and reading of people I never knew,
And as the sky hardens-
And the days become short,
You have to wake early to go for a walk,
Some wear aubergine colours in autumn time,
Or rustic brown and dark raven black,
Not bright summer shades of shine,
Left is a banquet, which has ended many days,
Where is the extravaganza!?
No one sits for the food made,
The pubs remain quite and the sales carry on,
As I walk through the fields,
My earphones plays a theme song,
But now the landscape different,
And old songs all sound the same,
Try to ignite an aura,
But that aura is cold caged,
Left in the 90s
With our riches with our gold,
Waiting for the summer but our last summer was but cold!.
By CrazygirlWww@QuestionHome@Com