Yesterday was a bad day for me so I wrote down some thoughts I would like to sha

Question: Yesterday was a bad day for me so I wrote down some thoughts I would like to share!?

"How many times can a person be broken
before they shatter!?
How many times can the heart be broken
before it no longer heals!?
How many times can a person offer their hand in friendship
before that hand closes into a fist forever!?
How many tears must I cry
before I learn!?"

"Has the time come to no longer
love my fellow man, care for my fellow man,
call someone a friend!?"

"Indeed that time has come
to harden my heart the way
others have!.
To close my hand into a fist,
the way others have!.
Gone is the heart that
loved so openly, without strings!.
In its place is now a heart
with to many bandages to allow
new love in!."

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Awww, my sweet Lucky that is beautiful and it hits close to home!. **hugs**Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great free style!. Often the hole in a heart never heals, but one can always stick a band aid on it and hope for better days!.
Always remember, true is rarely found without a few hearts being broken or cracked!. Just be sure that if you break another heart that you don't stomp on it, because the next one may be yours!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yep, aint nothing like a good break up to let those creative juices flow!. I've lived on dat street before mate, just keep expressing those feelings in anyway possible!.

I knw its hard to believe but it gets better!.!.the healing is a slow process, but it comes
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v!.touchy and thought provoking!.i too am in your state of mind!.so this fits me well!.good,the rythm,the flow and the theme ofcourse!.yea,let the heart with too many bandages wait for some love to enter and remove the bandages
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That gave me goose bumps!. I can relate to every word!. After 3 failed marriages I have given up on love!. The window to my heart is nailed shut!.
Your poem is beautiful yet haunting!. Sorry for your pain!.!.:(Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good, it's strange how the best poems and song lyrics tend to come from adversity in the author's personal life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome girl
I actually felt much like this yesterday too!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Amazing words!.!.!. very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bandages are not permanent!.
They'll need changing soon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

MIke is right don't give up!. Today may be better if not then tomorrow will!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The heart is like a puzzle, it can't be complete without all the piecesWww@QuestionHome@Com

those are strong words!. i have a brick around mine!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

good job chick!
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MAN!.!.!.I am feeling Lucky right nowWww@QuestionHome@Com

Let "Like" into your life and you will suffer less!.

I'm like I know all about it!.

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That was beautiful and very sad!. Don't close your heart!. You have too much to share to shut yourself off!. I've had a pretty rough month and yesterday was bad on YA but I have too many people in my daily life that depend on me to shut myself off!. I have too many wonderful contacts and some I would call dear friends on YA to let the Trolls and the YA community spoil it!. If they suspend me again I will come back!. Over and Over if I must for as long as I have one friend left on here!. You among a few others have taught me to loosen up and have fun on here!. I actually look forward to reading your stuff every morning!. It brightens my day!. That is proof that you are having a positive effect on some people and that makes it worth keeping that big heart of yours open!. I know you don't like long answers so I will leave it there!. Just don't give up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com